For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Wealth and Happiness. You should write at least 12

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Wealth and Happiness. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below:
1.有人认为拥有财富就拥有了幸福。
2.你的看法。

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答案 Wealth and Happiness Everyone wants to be wealthy. (1) Having great wealth symbolizes a person’s success and capability. Many people try to make money at all costs. They claim that wealth can bring everything they want. (2) In my opinion, people cannot do anything without money, but money is not everything. What money will bring you depends on your personal belief and goal in life. (3) If you are kind enough to help others, especially the poor, then money is a good thing to you. With it, you can do much more for the benefit of people and your country, and it will bring you happiness as well. If you want money to buy large apartments and luxury cars to keep up with others, or to pursue your materialistic enjoyment, you’ll never get the true happiness and even lose some happiness you once owned. (4) In a word, money is a double-edged sword for happiness. You should adopt a proper attitude towards money, and (5) only in this way can money be the source of your happiness.

解析 (1)开篇指出人们对待财富的看法。
(2)指出自己的观点——没有钱是不行的,但是金钱也不是万能的。
(3)用两个假设来论证自己的观点。
(4)结尾概括自己的观点,并指出财富是一把“双刃剑”。
(5)倒装句起强调作用。
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