Write an essay of 160 - 200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1. describe the drawing briefly,

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问题     Write an essay of 160 - 200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
    1. describe the drawing briefly,
    2. interpret its intended meaning, and
    3. give your comments.
    You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)
   

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答案 As is vividly shown in the drawings, three decades ago, on the road walked a young and vigorous mother, holding the little hand of her beloved daughter. And now, on the same road stands the grown-up daughter, supporting her elderly mother instead. Time flies, yet the radiant smiles on their faces still bloom like a flower. Below the picture lies a caption which reads; mutual support. The primary purpose of the drawings is to emphasize the significance of family affection, the tenderest and noblest e-motion of mankind. For thousands of years, venerating the old and cherishing the young has been considered the social responsibility and behavioral norm in China. Parents devote themselves full time to child-raising, with unselfish love, inexhaustible patience and meticulous care. However, as time moves on, our parents, falling into old age, become grey-haired and wrinkled. It is then the irremissible responsibility of us to support them. Taking care of our elderly parents, of course, is not limited to their material needs, for the spiritual ones—feeling heard, valued, and loved—are crucial for them to cast off loneliness. We, adult children, who are blessed with the love of our parents, should show more filial piety to them, for the filial duty is the most highly valued virtue in China. Only by assuming this responsibility can our society become more harmonious and civilized.

解析     今年的图画主题分明,题目考查的是现代人之间的关系——相携,这与05年大作文“养老足球赛”的主题高度相似。不过两个题目的命题角度不同:05年以负面角度加入主题,讽刺子女不赡养父母现象;而今年则从正面角度点明尊老爱幼这一主题。具体而言,左图以过去为背景,描绘了三十年前年轻母亲牵着女儿的小手,陪她成长;右图以现在为背景,描绘了三十年后长大成人的女儿搀扶着日渐衰老的母亲,伴她前行。通过对比,该组图画背后的寓意不言自明。写作时可从两方面展开论述:一是父母含辛茹苦地抚养子女,为之倾其所有;二是子女应知反哺,回报给父母同样的照顾与关爱。敬老这一话题贴近生活,利于考生发挥。
    第一段:描述图画。分析两幅图的异同点,展开对比描述,以此突显图画主题。此外,图画文字“相携”是点睛之笔,可在该段予以体现。
    第二段:揭示寓意,对“相携”展开深层分析。可将“为何应该反哺”作为论述重点,并指出关注父母精神需求的重要性。
    第三段:总结评论。呼吁子女孝敬父母,以使社会更加和谐、更加文明。
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