Read the story in Chinese below, and then write a composition of no less than 150 words under the title of "The Goal of Life". Y

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问题    Read the story in Chinese below, and then write a composition of no less than 150 words under the title of "The Goal of Life". Your composition should be based on the story and the following outline. Please write it clearly.
   Outlines:
   (1)What have you learned from the story?
   (2)What is the goal of your life? If you have achieved the goal of your life, what would you do?
                              目标
   在英国有一位残疾青年,他双腿走起路来很困难,却凭着坚强的信念和毅力创造了一次又 一次的壮举:他19岁时登上了世界最高峰珠穆朗玛峰;21岁时登上了阿尔卑斯山:22岁时登 上了乞力马扎罗山;28岁前他登完了世界上所有著名的高山。然而,就在28岁这一年他自杀 了。原来在他11岁时,他父母在攀登乞力马扎罗山时不幸遭遇雪崩双双遇难。他的父母在临行 前给他留下了遗嘱,希望他能像父母一样,登完世界上所有著名的高山。这位残疾青年把父母 的遗嘱作为他人生奋斗的目标,当全部目标实现的时候,他感到前所未有的无奈和绝望。他留 下遗言:“如今,功成名就的我感到无事可做了,我没有了新的目标……”

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答案 The Goal of Life It is quite obvious that the above story tells us that a disabled young man from British successfully finished climbing all the famous mountains including Mount Everest in his 28 yeas old, which is even difficult for a normal person. It is just because he regarded his parents’ last wish as his goal of life. However, he chose to commit suicide in the same year in that he thought he had no goals of life any more. From this story, we may easily conclude that the goal of life is something that we cannot do without. Such thing frequently occurs in our daily life. I am a case in point. Undoubtedly, my current goal of life is to pass MBA examination at my first attempt. Though it is extremely difficult for the aged graduates like climbing mountains, I am fully confident of achieving this goal this year. Of course, this is not the final goal of my life and to be a CEO in a big company is my next life target. If we can go on pursuing another new goal of life especially after achieving the old one, we can realize our personal values and make more contributions to the society in which we live. Based on what has been illustrated so far, all of us should have a correct attitude towards the goal of life — a person’s life should consist of many goals. Just like climbing, when we win one victory, we should set new goals for ourselves. Only in this way can we enjoy our colorful life and keep pace with the times。

解析    本题属于主题论证型考题;考生可根据提纲要求参考以下写作套路进行写作。
   Paragraph 1 描述文字+得出结论:
   It is quite obvious/apparent to all of us that the above story describes that讲故事(2-3句慨述。From this story, we can easily arrive at such conclusion that结论(参考提示语)。
   Paragraph 2 根据主题分类展开或举例说明:
   Undoubtedly, such case frequently occur in our daily life. A case in point is that______. There is another example to illustrate this point. 例子(也可根据主题分类,参考问题解决型、积极有利型、利弊分析型和A/B比较型)
   Paragraph 3 作者的结论或评论:
   Based on what has been illustrated above, we should have a correct attitude towards 主题——(解释主题)(如one’s life consists of lots of goals. )If we…, we will necessarily benefit a lot from it.
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