The global market share of Wall Street investment banks has increased to 50% . European firms have shrunk. Asian aspirants have

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问题 The global market share of Wall Street investment banks has increased to 50% . European firms have shrunk. Asian aspirants have trodden water.

选项 A、choppy
B、run on
C、fragment
D、correct

答案A

解析 【改正】The global market share of Wall Street investment banks has increased to 50%as European firms have shrunk and Asian aspirants have trodden water.
因为本题为过度使用简单句,所以是不连贯句错误。应用连词或标点符号把三个简单句连贯起来。第一句中的increased为第二句中shrunk和第三句中trodden water的结果,所以应改写成含有原因状语从句的复合句,在此为前果后因。
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