For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying "Persistent people begin their success wher

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying "Persistent people begin their success where others end in failure." You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of perseverance. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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答案 As the saying goes, "Persistent people begin their success where others end in failure." It indicates that perseverance is surely one of the most important traits one needs to possess to become successful in personal relationships, social situations and business endeavors. In fact, millions of people never seem to achieve success in various goals they set up for themselves. It is not because they are not capable or inferior but they lack the spirit of perseverance. Perseverance is the ability and drive to start and continue steadfastly on the path towards any goal you set. Frequently this factor alone is the difference between failure and success. Perseverance is also a personal value, because it shapes and strengthens your character which allows you to keep your focus on your goal. Thus, nothing fundamentally good comes without hard work and determination. In my opinion, no matter how grand and how hard your goals are, you should always strive to meet them, for only through fearless and unremitting efforts can they truly make your ways to success.

解析     这是一篇谚语类作文,要求阐述坚持的重要性。此类作文一般为三段式,即,第一段提出所要评述的谚语。第二段具体分析为什么坚持很重要。第三段总结全文,指出坚持的意义。
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