You have decided to enter a short story competition in an international magazine. The competition rules say that the story must

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问题 You have decided to enter a short story competition in an international magazine. The competition rules say that the story must end with the following words: That one telephone carl changed my life for ever. Write your story.

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答案 The phone rang as I was leaving. I was already late for school, but I hurried back "Hello?" -- no one was there. I left the house. I was too late the bus had just left. I had no choice but to wait for another I watched my classmates in the windows as they disappeared over a hill. As I came into the empty classroom my teacher jumped, as ill were a ghost. "Where is everyone? What’s happening? He didn’t look at me. "The bus was hit by a truck. I don’t know how many survived." The next months were a blur of tears and shock. Fifteen of the class had died and twenty were injured. In the classroom, our last year of high school passed quickly; we barely noticed. I was strange to them after that--I had escaped. I was never really one of the group again. I couldn’t know what they knew. Only later did I ask: Who made that call? I could have been on that bus too. That one telephone call changed my life for ever.

解析  [写作要求]
文章基本内容
 所写文章要以题目给出的提示句作为结尾
语法与结构
 词汇的选择要契合文章的命题
文章结构及连贯性
 至少有两个小段落
适用文体及格式
 非正式文叙述或中立型
目标读者感觉
 能够理解故事产线
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