The Way to Success Write a short essay entitled The Way to Success by commenting on Abraham Lincoln’s famous remark, "Give m

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问题     The Way to Success
    Write a short essay entitled The Way to Success by commenting on Abraham Lincoln’s famous remark, "Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe." You should write 160-200 words.

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答案 Abraham Lincoln once said, "Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe." This famous remark sheds some light on the way to success. A good preparation is the prerequisite for success, although there are lots of factors that could affect success. This has been confirmed by numerous evidences. Perhaps there’s no better example than the case of hosting the Olympic Games—either the hosting country or the athletes must take years of preparation for the one-month competition. The fact that years of research come ahead of minutes of the successful launching of the satellites serves as another case in point. Moreover, history abounds with great men as Abraham Lincoln who believe that "A beard well lathered is half shaved". It is advisable that we should attach great importance to thorough preparation. Well begun is half done, so get fully prepared before you put your hand to a task.

解析     这是一篇主题句分析型作文,要求从林肯的典故说起,围绕文章主题“通往成功之路”提出自己的观点并进行分析。根据题目要求可以将文章内容安排如下:
    第一段从林肯的典故“如果给我六小时砍一棵树,我会用前四小时磨斧头”说起,并提出观点:充分的准备是通往成功的先决条件。
    第二段以具体实例对观点进行论证。只有经过充分的准备,奥运会主办国以及奥运健将们才能获得成功;人造卫星数秒的发射成功与否取决于年复一年的精心准备;历史上有很多人像林肯一样坚信“磨刀不误砍柴工。”
    第三段总结并再次重申观点。
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