Study the following set of drawings carefully and write an essay in which you should 1) describe the set of drawings, interp

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问题     Study the following set of drawings carefully and write an essay in which you should
    1) describe the set of drawings, interpret its meaning, and
    2) point out its implications in our life.
    You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
   

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答案 The picture above depicts a flower sheltered under a greenhouse, safe and sound from the heavy rain. The next picture shows the same flower under a different condition with no shelter exposed to the storm and lightening. And the flower withers with peddles falling on the ground. These pictures remind me of the spoiled kids in today’s society. Nowadays parents pay too much attention on their children and provide all that the children ask for without restraints, which results in the appearance of many "little princes" and "little princesses". These pictures make us aware that if we over-protect the children, they will be too fragile to the danger and difficulties outside. Since parents can not accompany their children through their life, children must be given the opportunity to be independent and self-responsible, or the "over-love" will finally harm the children. There is an old saying, "spare the rod and spoil the child". Now it is high time that parents brought their children out of the greenhouse and let them fight on their own.

解析     文章第一段分别描述了两幅图画展现的不同场景.比较了花朵在移出温室前后面对暴风雨时的不同遭遇。第二段作者就联系了现实来做深层剖析,即被宠坏的孩子们正如温室中的花朵,过度保护反而会造成孩子们的脆弱,并用Since引出对原因的进一步阐述。最后,文章用There is an old saying做生动总结,鼓励家长们让孩子学会自己奋斗。全文联系现实,立意准确,结构及逻辑清晰,俗语引用得恰到好处。
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