For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Playing Truant. You should write at least 150 words fo

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Playing Truant. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.现在大学里逃课现象很严重
2.你认为产生这种现象的原因是什么
3.怎样才能杜绝这一现象
                              Playing Truant

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答案 Playing Truant The current decade has witnessed the prevalence of playing truant on campus. Specifically, it is not surprising to see some schoolboys playing computer games in internet-cafe during class time. Apart from that, it is not uncommon that schoolgirls go shopping regardless of their courses. Clearly, this issue is pressing for our serious consideration. The reasons for skipping class are various, such as the colorful activities of campus, forgetting the time, playing computer games, sleeping and so on. But the chief one, in my viewpoint, is that we think college life is to play and enjoy instead of learning. After three years of hard work in senior high school, many students assume that they can finally relax in college and do not need to study hard any more. Thus they don’t take college courses seriously and play truant very frequently. It is no doubt that playing truant is bad for college students. There is an urgent need to stop this kind of phenomenon. On one hand, the school, both the administrators and teachers should prevent students from playing truant. On the other hand, more importantly, we college students should realize its bad effects and start from ourselves to stop playing truant on campus.

解析     本次写作试题要求对“大学逃课现象”展开分析讨论。要求考生先描述大学里的逃课现象,然后分析产生这种现象的原因,最后就怎样才能杜绝这一现象进行阐述。写作可以按照试卷上给出的汉语提纲展开。第一段可以直接点题,阐明现在大学里逃课现象很严重。可以运用句式it is not surprising that…和it is not uncommon that…还可以用It is…that…句式。表示连接过渡可以用词组apart from,类似表达有what is more,moreover,besides等。文章主体部分即第二段分析产生逃课现象的原因,可以运用句式The reasons for…are various,such as…和The chief one is…列举原因时常用In the first place…In the second place…或To start with…/To begin with…Secondly,Finally/Lastly等。末段应该阐述应对这种现状的解决办法.提出对策和建议时可用衔接词语On one hand…On the other hand…或For one thing…for another…等.
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