The Trend of Educational Development For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition of no less than 12

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问题 The Trend of Educational Development
    For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition of no less than 120 words on the topic "The Trend of Educational Development". You must base your composition on the following instructions:
    (1)以下面的折线图和柱形图为依据,描述全球范围内学生入学情况和政府教育投资情况发展趋势。
    (2)你的看法。
   

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答案The Trend of Educational Development During the past 50 years, total enrollment at all levels has been going up steadily. As is shown in the line graph, the number of higher education students has increased by a factor of 14. When it comes to public expenditure on education, the poorer the region, the smaller the budget for public education. At all levels, public expenditure per student has generally remained the same in relation to the gross national product, with an exception of the least developed countries where public education expenditure has been gradually reduced from 2.8% in 1980 to 2% in 1997. From the analysis we can see that public expenditure on education has remained stable despite the steady rise in enrolment. Yet it is widely believed that greater investment is required to educate all students properly, including those from disadvantaged backgrounds. To solve the contradiction, the governments of all land need to raise more funds by all means. They may enlist the help of the private sector, for example. Indeed now it’s time to reinforce the position of the private sector in the educational market.

解析     本文按照命题要求,共分为两段。一段描写变化趋势,分析数据;一段针对分析结果,表达个人观点。描述和分析图表的时候,作者采取夹叙夹议的手法,先概括结论,再导入数据支持论证。并且作者只援引能够反映最突出或最与众不同的问题或现象的数据来对图表进行描述,或支持论证的要点。
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