The Internet Bars have been on the top of many kids’ list of leisure activities. Look at the following picture carefully and wri

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问题     The Internet Bars have been on the top of many kids’ list of leisure activities. Look at the following picture carefully and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should start with a brief description of the picture, explain its intended meaning, and give your view on the issue.

    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 The Negative Influence of the Internet Bar In the picture, Xiao Bao’s parents and grandparents are looking for him. Near them is a well with the inscription "the Internet bar". Xiao Bao’s schoolbag is right next to the well. This picture, though implicitly, tries to tell its readers the danger of the Internet bar. Many children are devoured by this monster, as it lures them with online games and other earthly pleasures. In my opinion, the owners of the Internet bars should take on more responsibilities to address this problem. To begin with, they should prohibit children under 18 from entering the Internet bars. They should be punished, if they are found serving kids. Moreover, real name registration should be practiced in the Internet bars. For instance, those who go to the bars should have their ID cards ready for registration. And all the users’ login and logout information shall be linked with their ID cards, which will form an Internet bar user database that is available to the police in case of locating a missing person. To sum up, Xiao Bao’s tragedy could be prevented if the Internet bar owners provide service for adults only and register users’ real name in the bars.

解析     这幅图片刻画了一家人在寻找小宝的情景。小宝很有可能掉进了“网吧”的井里,难以自拔。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:
    第一段描绘图片,并指出图片的意图:许多青少年掉进网吧的深渊,无法自拔。
    第二段提出个人看法:网吧店主应承担更多责任来解决这一问题。其一,网吧应该禁止未满18周岁的人入内;其二,网吧应该实行实名登记,让在网吧上网的人有迹可寻。
    第三段总结全文:禁止未满18周岁的人进网吧和实行实名登记能避免小宝悲剧的重演。
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