Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. Yo

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问题     Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should
    1) interpret the chart, and
    2) give your comments.
    You should write about 150 words.
   

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答案 The bar chart shows the reasons leading to teenage students’ declining fitness. As can be seen, 84% of the respondents think the exam-oriented system is the leading cause, followed by a lack of exercise routine (74%), PE lessons being ignored (65%), computer and electronic products (64%). In addition, some other causes are mentioned, including unhealthy resting schedule (58%), lack of sports facilities (48%), dieting structure (37%), and unqualified teachers (19%). The survey results reflect the fact that students are burdened by the exam-oriented system, and are deprived of their time and opportunity to exercise their body. With the tight study schedule, many students are overwhelmed by practice tests, assignments and exams. To ensure students’ physical well-being, it is advisable that schools organize routine activities to encourage students to do exercise. For instance, some free time should be planned in the daily schedule to encourage students to do whatever sports that interest them. In shout, students’ fitness can be greatly improved if due attention is given.

解析 该图表显示了青少年体质下降的原因调查。从图表可见,应试教育和缺乏运动习惯是最主要的两个原因。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:第一段描述图表。第二段指出应试教育压力大,课业繁重,使学生无暇运动。并建议学校每天安排一定的自由活动时间,鼓励学生利用此时间进行体育锻炼。第三段总结全文。
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