For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Obtain the Information Online. You should write at lea

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Obtain the Information Online. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.随着网络的发展,我们可以轻而易举地从网上获取各种信息
2.如此便捷地获取信息有利也有弊
3.你的看法
                        Obtain the Information Online

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答案 Obtain the Information Online Today, the Internet is one of the most powerful tools throughout the world. The Internet is a collection of various services and resources. Almost all households contain the Internet)however, before people connect to the Internet, they need to be aware of its disadvantages and advantages. Many fear the Internet because of its disadvantages. When children are online, they can easily be lured into something dangerous. Another major disadvantage of the Internet is privacy. As people surf the Internet, they are constantly giving information to web sites. People should become aware that the collection, selling, or sharing of the information they provide online increases the chances that their information will fall into the wrong hands. Despite all of the terrible disadvantages of the Internet, there are numerous advantages. The most common thing the Internet used for is research. Children and students are among the top people who use the Internet for research. Today, it is almost required that students use the Internet for searching information. In conclusion, people can either choose to take advantage of this era. or simply let it pass by. The Internet is a very powerful tool. However, people need to be extremely aware of the disadvantages as well.

解析     本次写作试题要求对“在网上获取信息”这一话题展开分析讨论。要求考生先描述互联网的广泛用途及重要性,然后分析目前上网的一些弊端和优点,最后指出我们应该正确有效地利用网上信息,“取其精华,弃之糟粕”。文章第一段应该直接点题,阐明互联网是人们生活中必不可少的工具。此类典型句有…is one of the most powerful tools…还有It is widely acknowledged that…第一段可以用however转折过渡,引出这种现象的利与弊。文章主体部分也可以用despite表示转折,注意despite后接that从句,in despite of后接sth.在陈述利弊时可用的句型有this phenomenon shows…或to start with…,in the second place…文章最后可用表总结的短语in conclusion,类似表达还有in brief,all in all或as a result…等。
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