For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled On Perseverance by commenting on the saying, " The history

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled On Perseverance by commenting on the saying, " The history of human achievement is filled with stories of people who persevere, refusing to give up in the struggle to meet their goals." You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案 When people try to reach their goals, they are often in a dilemma about whether they should give up when no progress is made. Under such circumstances, they should remind themselves about a saying, "The history of human achievement is filled with stories of people who persevere, refusing to give up in the struggle to meet their goals." First of all, it takes time for real progress to reveal itself. We all know that Rome wasn’t built in a day. Success is so difficult that it may take months, or even years before our efforts are paid back. That’s why we need patience and perseverance. Secondly, making no progress doesn’t mean we have taken the wrong path. The way to success is like climbing a mountain. Some of us may give up halfway, asserting that it is an impossible mission. Yet a little detour may have led us to the top. Thus, no matter how grand and how hard people’s goals are, they should always strive to meet them. Only through unremitting efforts can they truly make their way to success.

解析     这是一篇议论文,主要讨论的是在没有取得进展的情况下是否应停止努力。
    第一段先提出一个人们经常遇到的两难的境地,在没有取得进展的情况下是否应停止努力,然后由Under such circumstances过渡到自己的观点:要坚持不懈。
    第二段阐述不应放弃的两个理由。第一,成功需要时间。罗马不是一天建成的.可能要花几个月或好几年的时间我们的付出才能有所回报,因此我们需要耐心和坚持。第二,没有进展不是我们走错了道路,成功之路就像爬山,有些人可能中途放弃,声称这是一件不可能完成的任务,事实则是有时候再走几步就会峰回路转,达到顶峰。本段巧妙运用了Rome wasn’t built in a day这一经典谚语,为文章增色不少。
    第三段总结全文。不管目标多么宏伟,多么困难,也要坚持不懈实现目标,只有通过不懈的努力才能成功。
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