You recently attended an exhibition and saw some equipment you think your company should buy. Write an email to your company’s P

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问题 You recently attended an exhibition and saw some equipment you think your company should buy.
Write an email to your company’s Purchasing Manager:
    saying what the equipment is
    suggesting how the equipment could benefit the company
    explaining why it is important to place an order soon.
Write 40-50 words.

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答案Sample A I have a piece of good news to inform you. I saw a new model of laser-printer on the exhibition of last week. It is beautiful and of good quality. Because many companies are very interested in it, I think we’d better make an order soon to replace the old one in our office. Band 3 All content points are covered, and the range of language is satisfactory. Both the format and register are appropriate, and although there are some errors, these do not obscure communication of the message. Sample B I am writing to suggest that we could buy an overhead projector I saw in an exhibition. It would be useful to do the presentations of the new products. The XP3 model has the latest technology and, if we order it soon, the supplier will grant us a 20% discount. Regards. Band 5 All points are covered, and language is controlled and concise, and demonstrates a wide lexical range. The register is consistently appropriate, as is the format.

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