Write a composition according to the following outline: 1. 请家教的益处 2. 家教可能带来的负作用; 3. 我是怎样看待家教的。 You should write

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问题     Write a composition according to the following outline:
    1. 请家教的益处
    2. 家教可能带来的负作用;
    3. 我是怎样看待家教的。
    You should write about 160-200 words neatly.

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答案 Positive and Negative Aspects of Home Tutoring People’s attitudes towards tutoring are different. Some think of it positively. They hold this Opinion because home tutoring helps kids to get over difficulties by raising their academic scores and improving their learning skills. But every coin has two sides, although the above view sounds reasonable. Others think of it negatively. From their point of view, home tutoring may add a financial burden to parents and a heavy academic burden to children. Too much tutoring influences children’s normal study. In my view, home tutoring has both advantages and disadvantages. Moderate tutoring can help children to improve their learning, especially for those who lack the ability to study by themselves, but excessive tutoring may spoil these children. It may make children become too dependent and have less ability to solve their problems. Therefore, it’s advisable that we should seek help from tutors when it is necessary.

解析     这是一篇提纲式作文。根据提纲提示,本文可采用三段式的谋篇方式。经分析我们可确定题中所给三句汉语提示句,均可视为各段的主题句。故第一段主题句的提纲点应为:advantages of home tutoring;第二段主题句的提纲点应为:disadvantages of home tutoring;第三段主题句应为:My view is that....、由此可墓本完成全文构思。在谈论请家教的益处时,get over difficulties in study,raise academic scores,improve learning skills等可以作为支撑点。在谈论请家教的负作用时,add financial burden,add academic bur den,make students depend on home tutors等均可作为论据。最后一段,从自己的观点出发,从正反两面得出结论。
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