Most companies consider one’s degree when recruiting new members. Some think it is necessary since degree is the proof of one’s

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问题     Most companies consider one’s degree when recruiting new members. Some think it is necessary since degree is the proof of one’s education. Others doubt if degree is the only thing valuable. What is your opinion? Write a composition of about 400 words on the following topic:  

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答案 Is Degree the Only Thing Valuable? University, as a significant cultural force, has brought itself to wide recognition and undeniable high social status, therefore, people believe one’s academic performance in university will significantly set his future. In our society, the most commonly recognized standard of a student’s academic achievement is the degree. Some people regard the degree as the only thing valuable while studying in college. Admittedly, the degree is essential for students who want to have a prosperous future, but it is by no means the only opportunity university grants us. First of all,the university provides us with a huge amount of knowledge but not a paper of a certificate. Students in the university should be fascinated by the knowledge they wants to know, but not forces themselves to learn the textbooks so as to pass the examination to get their degree. This can only prevent students from building a solid foundation for their professional knowledge and destroy their interest in learning. Only when students realize the degree is not the only thing can they hold the proper attitude towards learning and study efficiently and happily. Second, the university presents us an enjoyable atmosphere of study as welt as of other activities. Associating with different people on campus, discussing with your professor over a practical topic, and reading in the quiet library, all these can strongly shape your inclination, mature your thoughts, widen your horizon, and enrich your personality. When students consider the university as a place to enhance their standard of appreciation and taste, and to receive education in all aspects, the university can give them more than degrees-it will be an all-round reward. Lastly, it is not always absolutely true that the higher the degree, the better the job. Many great men made their startling contribution without a good degree or even without a good school record. For example, Einstein got many poor grades in college and sometimes he even thought the exams as "intolerable". But he turned out to be one of the most brilliant scientific giants in history. The truth is that his university career and the new ideas he contacted with in college gave rise to his profound insight of the world and then the theory of relativity" was born. So we can see clearly that degree isn’t everything. So, as I see it, though the degree plays an important role in one’s future career, it will by no means dominate one’s life. Universities furnish a variety of opportunities for students; degree is only one of them. What you’d learned in university is more essential, for it is your real asset. Seize every opportunity and take full advantage of what the university provides, then there can be no future save a brilliant one.

解析 本文要求针对学历是否是唯一有价值的东西这一论题陈述自己的观点,并且给出充分的论据,最后,在以上议论的基础上得出一个自然而合理的结论,或者总结。行文上,第一段提出观点要明确,切忌模棱两可。可以用反驳法,先说明学历对人们的影响,然后提出自己明确的观点。第二部分分段写论据,要做到层次分明、论述充分,有条理、有逻辑地从不同方面阐述自己的观点。可首先论述大学提供给我们的是知识而不只是一纸文凭;其次论述大学营造了学习和其他活动的氖围;最后论述学历并非是找到好工作的保障。最后一段,自然得出结论,语言要精辟,以加深读者对本文的印象。最后,也可再次强调大学提供给学生的并非只有文凭,做到首尾呼应。
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