For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Chinese Parenting VS Western Parenting. You sho

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Chinese Parenting VS Western Parenting. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below.
1.在教育孩子方面,有人认为中式教育(从严)更好
2.有人则认为西式教育(从宽)更好
3.我认为……
                    Chinese Parenting vs Western Parenting

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答案 Chinese Parenting vs Western Parenting (1) People’s opinions vary when it comes to how parents raise their children. (2) Some people claim that Chinese parenting is superior. (3) Chinese parents are extremely strict and expect nothing but the best from their children. (3) This parenting method motivates kids and results in (5) producing children that are successful. (4) Compared with Western parents, the Chinese seem to (5) bring up children who display academic excellence, musical mastery and professional success. (6) Some people think otherwise. They argue that Western parenting is better. Western parents allow children the freedom to explore other possibilities besides academic study, respect their rights to a happy and playful childhood, and give more encouragement. This will help (5) foster smart, creative, and physically and mentally healthy children rather than the goof only good at academic results. (7) For my part, I prefer Western parenting. Compared with highly strict Chinese parenting, the Western way (8) exerts more positive influence on children’s mental health. Many Chinese parents now (8) focus too much on children’s IQ development but little on their mental health. That is mainly to blame for rising child psychological problems in recent years including attention deficit disorder, behavior problems and conduct disorders.

解析 (1)引出下文
(2)抛出观点:中式教育更优越
(3)进一步解释原因
(4)对比,突出中式教育的优势
(5)“养育出”的多种表达,富于变化
(6)引出另一些人的观点。better与上段的superior对应
(7)给出自己的看法
(8)亮点短语:“施加积极的影响”“过于关注……”
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