The time for sharpening pencils, arranging your desk, and doing almost anything else instead of writing has ended. The first dra

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问题     The time for sharpening pencils, arranging your desk, and doing almost anything else instead of writing has ended. The first draft will appear on the page only if you stop avoiding the inevitable and sit, stand up, or lie down to write. 【B11】________
    Be flexible. Your outline should smoothly conduct you from one point to the next, but do not permit it to railroad you. If a relevant and important idea occurs to you now, work it into the draft. 【B12】____________Grammar, punctuation, and spelling can wait until you revise. Concentrate on what you are saying. Good writing most often occurs when you are in hot pursuit of an idea rather than in a nervous search for errors.
    【B13】________Your pages will be easier to keep track of that way, and, if you have to clip a paragraph to place it elsewhere, you will not lose any writing on the other side.
    It you are working on a word processor, you can take advantage of its capacity to make additions and deletions as well as move entire paragraphs by making just a few simple keyboard commands. Some software programs can also check spelling and certain grammatical elements in your writing. 【B14】________ ________________These printouts are also easier to read than the screen when you work on revisions.
    Once you have a first draft on paper, you can delete material that is unrelated to your thesis and add material necessary to illustrate your points and make your paper convincing. The students who wrote "The A & P as a State of Mind" wisely dropped a paragraph that questioned whether Sammy displays chauvinistic attitudes toward women. 【B15】________
    Remember that your initial draft is only that. You should go through the paper many times—and then again—working to substantiate and clarify your ideas. You may even end up with several entire versions of the paper. Rewrite. The sentences within each paragraph should be related to a single topic. Transitions should connect one paragraph to the next so that there are no abrupt or confusing shifts. Awkward or wordy phrasing or unclear sentences and paragraphs should be mercilessly poked and prodded into shape.
    A) To make revising easier, leave wide margins and extra space between lines so that you can easily add words, sentences, and corrections. Write on only one side of the paper.
    B ) After you have clearly and adequately, developed the body of your paper, pay particular attention to the introductory and concluding paragraphs. It’s probably best to write the introduction last, after you know precisely what you are introducing. Concluding paragraphs demand equal attention because they leave the reader with a final impression.
    C ) It’s worth remembering, however, that though a clean copy fresh off a printer may look terrific, it will read only as well as the thinking and writing that have gone into it. Many writers prudently store their data on disks and print their pages each time they finish a draft to avoid losing any material because of power failures or other problems.
    D ) It makes no difference how you write, just so you do. Now that you have developed a topic into a tentative thesis, you can assemble your notes and begin to flesh out whatever outline you have made.
    E ) Although this is an interesting issue, it has nothing to do with the thesis, which explains how the setting influences Sammy’s decision to quit his job. Instead of including that paragraph, she added one that described Lengel’s crabbed response to the girls so that she could lend up to the A & P "policy" he enforces.
    F ) In the final paragraph about the significance of the setting in “A & P” the student brings together the reasons Sammy quit his job by referring to his refusal to accept Lengel’s store policies.
    G ) By using the first draft as a means of thinking about what you want to say, you will very likely discover more than your notes originally suggested. Plenty of good writers don’t use outlines at all but discover ordering principles as they write. Do not attempt to compose a perfectly correct draft the first time around.
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答案D

解析 本填空出现在首段的段尾处,我们重点定位本填空之前的段落原文信息,从中查找和定位关键提示线索,再根据线索去7个待选项中找匹配项。本文是一篇阐述如何写作的文章,而且首段是一个开头引领段,即引出这个话题。特别是本填空之前的句子是一个条件句:The first draft will appear on the page only if you stop avoiding the inevitable and sit,stand up,or lie down to write.(只要你停止避开这些不可避开的并且坐着、站着或者躺着去写,第一段就会跃然纸上。)此处的意思其实是说“只要你开始行动”,这也是这个条件句中表达的重点信息,关键是本句中出现了“sit,stand up,or lie down to write”的信息,即描述了写的方式,根据这些线索从选项中定位出答案为D),因为选项D)的信息讲述了:It makes no difference how you write,just so you do.Now that you have developed a topic into a tentative thesis,you can assemble your notes and begin to flesh out whatever outline you have made.这里的一个关键线索就是“how”。因为“how”表示了写的方式,而且该句的意思:It makes no difference how you write,just so you do.(你如何写并不重要,关键是开始行动。)这个信息与本填空前的原文信息:The first draft will appear on the page only if you stop avoiding the inevitable and sit,stand up,or lie down to write.(只要你停止避开这些不可避开的,坐着、站着或者躺着去写,第一段就会跃然纸上。)实际上是复现结构,是同样的意思重复描述,因此选项D)中的信息与本填空之前的原文信息是最相近的信息,所以答案为选项D)。
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