Directions: Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your

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问题 Directions:
    Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should
    1) interpret the chart, and
    2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words.

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答案 The chart reveals the negative effects on children caused by parents’ absence from home. As can be seen, the most voiced concern is that children’s study outcomes will suffer, with 47% of the respondents believing this is the case. This is followed by children’s psychological problems (27%) and life problems (25%). Other less frequently expressed concerns include children’s insufficient interpersonal skills (13%) and sense of insecurity (10%). Informed by the survey results, one could understand the extent to which children are unfavorably impacted when parents are not around. Based on the results, it is not difficult to explain why left-behind children tend to underachieve at school. Without parents’ guidance, kids are hard to learn from good examples and are more likely to get distracted from study. And they are more likely to misbehave without parents’ discipline. Given the negative effects, parents are advised to put their children before their business, but not the other way around. To parents, no achievement would be greater than their kid’s healthy growth.

解析 该图表显示了父母在外工作对孩子造成的负面影响。从图表可见,比较多的受访者认为会对孩子的学习、心理和生活方面带来影响。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:
第一段描述图表。
第二段解释父母“模范作用”的重要性。
第三段提出建议,发出呼吁。
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