For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Training Classes. You should write at least 120 wor

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Training Classes. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1.社会上有各种各样的培训班
2.该现象产生的原因
3.我的看法
                            On Training Classes

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答案 On Training Classes At present, people are busy attending all kinds of training classes, which comprise a wide range of fields such as foreign languages, computer, chess, music, etc. There are mainly three reasons accounting for the phenomenon. First of all, in the information age, more and more people are aware of the necessity of broadening their horizon, which can be achieved by attending some special training courses. More importantly, for most people, training classes can help them become more competitive to achieve their goals. Finally, as living standard improves, more and more people regard training courses as a good way of leisure. Reflecting upon the phenomenon, I suggest we take into consideration its negative effects on people, young students in particular. It is true that when young kids are pressured to take all manner of training courses, they will lose their freedom, happiness, and creativity in the long run.

解析 ①开门见山,指出人们热衷于参加各种培训班这一现象。
②指出产生这一现象的三个原因,使用First of all,More importantly,Finally层层递进分析原因,连贯而清晰。
③使用I suggest结构引出作者自己的观点:要对培训班有一个全面的认识,必须认识到它们对人们的负面影响。
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