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  3. Your dormitory at the college is neighboring a very busy snack street. You are always woken up in the early hours by all kinds o

Your dormitory at the college is neighboring a very busy snack street. You are always woken up in the early hours by all kinds o

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问题     Your dormitory at the college is neighboring a very busy snack street. You are always woken up in the early hours by all kinds of loud noises outside and it smells bad whenever the windows are open. You suffer a lot from lacking sleep and uncomfortable breathing. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college.
    1. You should write about 100 words.
    2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Zhang Wei" instead.
    3. Do not write the address.
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答案 Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction concerning the present accommodation. The room I live in is overwhelmingly noisy and unpleasantly smelly. All my dissatisfaction is attributed to the snack street directly outside my dormitory. For one thing, various noises in the street are always extremely piercing from early morning till midnight. For another, unspeakable smells of tail gases, fuels and rotten foods make me sick frequendy. To handle this tough situation, I hope our school can negotiate with the snack street for an ideal solution. Moreover, I would be thankful if able to move to another dormitory immediately, preferably far away from the snack street. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei
解析     投诉信主要用于利益受损或者生活受扰时，旨在表达作者的不满和抗议；但投诉和抱怨只是途径，最终目的是解决问题或补偿损失。因此考生在写投诉信的时候，除了说明投诉对象、投诉原因以及所受影响外，还需要提出建议或者督促对方采取措施，以便解决问题。如此一来，投诉信才能真正发挥效用。本文中的投诉对象、原因及影响在指令要求中均已说明，考生应结合这些信息提出自己的建议和解决方案。虽然是投诉信，但也要做到叙述客观，语气礼貌。
    第一段：表明目的，提出投诉。首句点明写信目的——投诉住宿问题，并详述问题表现在哪些方面。
    第二段：充分延展，阐明缘由。先揭示问题的根源——紧邻的餐饮街；再根据指令要求，从噪音和气味两方面论述自己受其困扰。
    第三段：提出建议，表明愿望。针对当前问题，提出个人建议；同时表明自己希望更换宿舍的愿望。
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