Write an essay based on the following table. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the table, and 2) give your comments

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问题    Write an essay based on the following table. In your writing, you should
   1) interpret the table, and
   2) give your comments.
   You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)
   

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答案 The table shows that the income sources of Chinese students are quite different from those of American students. In China, 85% of students’ money is from their parents while in America only 40% of students’ money is provided by their parents. Chinese students earn only 5% from part-time jobs and 5% from student loan. However, American students got 20% and 25% of their money from these two sources respectively. In addition, fellowship or scholarship takes up 15% of American students’ income while income from this source for Chinese students occupies only 5%. There are probably two reasons contributing to the differences. First, in China, students without sustainable income are still considered dependent on parents. Therefore, it is natural for them to ask their parents for money. By contrast, American students over 18 years have developed more senses of financial independence. Second, since America is more developed than China, it is relatively easier for American students to find part-time jobs. Therefore, a larger proportion of income comes from part-time job in America. I believe in future, more Chinese students will realize the necessity of self-dependence and try to make their own living through part-time jobs and other ways.

解析    本次作文题是一个表格,关于中美学生收入来源。其中美国学生收入少部分来自父母,但大部分来自兼职、学生贷款和奖学金,相比之下,中国学生的收入大部分来自父母,少部分来自其他。作文以此为切入点,分析这一现象,并给出个人见解。全文结构如下:
   第一段:分析表格的基本信息,指出各项情况所占的比重,重点指出中美学生收入来源的差异。
   第二段:分析产生差异的主要原因。
   第三段:希望未来中国学生能够更多依靠自己。
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