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Man-made beauty is a new term that appeared in recent years. Many people, mostly young girls, beautify themselves through variou

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问题     Man-made beauty is a new term that appeared in recent years. Many people, mostly young girls, beautify themselves through various operations. How do you comment on this phenomenon? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
                                My View on Man-made Beauty
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
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答案 My View on Man-made Beauty The desire for a beautiful appearance is human nature. The plastic surgery may really mean something to some people, such as becoming more beautiful and confident. But every coin has two sides, and so does the man-made beauty practice. The reasons are as follows. Firstly, one’s appearance is God’s blessing. Though after breast enlargement surgery, women look sexier than before, many of them are diagnosed with mammary gland diseases. Another serious problem is that they risk being unable to breastfeed. Secondly, advocating such a practice will mislead people into the false judgment of true beauty. The concept of beauty is quite rich in connotation. It should include many virtues like honesty, diligence, etc. , which should be the real mainstream of our aesthetic taste. The practice of man-made beauty will confuse those who are to develop a correct concept of beauty. Concerning the above possible harm the practice may bring about, I am strongly against it and advocate true and natural beauty. Besides, people should pay more attention to the cultivation of their inner beauty since the inner beauty outweighs the external beauty in the long run.
解析     本题是一个开放性题目，要求考生就整容这一现象陈述自己的观点。整容作为一个新兴产业，正得到越来越多的人的青睐，特别是年轻女性。考生可以先表明自己的观点，然后进行具体论述，言之有理即可，最后总结全文。
    开头部分首先指出爱美是人的天性，整容会使一些人更加漂亮和自信。接着话锋一转，指出整容也有负面影响。
    中间部分用 “Firstly…” 和 “Secondly…”具体阐述整容的负面影响：人的外表是天生的，整容可能会导致一些疾病或其他弊端；倡导整容会误导人们对真正的美的判断。
    结尾部分首先用“Concerning the above possible harm…”承接上文，总结论点。然后通过 “Besides…”提出呼吁：人们应该更注重内在美。
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