Write an essay of 160—200 words based on the following drawing, In your essay, you should first describe the drawing, then inter

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问题     Write an essay of 160—200 words based on the following drawing, In your essay, you should first describe the drawing, then interpret its meaning, and give your comment on it.
    You should write neatly.


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答案 The cartoon vividly presents a picture how three sons and a daughter treat their old, helpless father. They each stand in a different comer of a football field. The eldest son kicks out the father, who huddles up like a ball. The other children are prepared to ward him off. Cruelly, none of them is willing to receive their father. The picture is thought-provoking, and what it illustrates is a common phenomenon in today’s society: many grown-up children refuse to support their aging parents. While they enjoy a comfortable life, their parents are neglected and reduced to utter poverty, as these elderly people have grown so physically weak that they no longer have the means to support themselves. I think these children have betrayed their own conscience and therefore may subject them selves to social contempt and criticism. According to Chinese culture, to be kind to one’s parents is the height of virtue. We owe so much to our patents in that they not only gave us life but have done much in brining us up. It is against nature for us to shirk the responsibility of taking care of our parents when they are old. Rather, we have the duty to pay back their love by making their later years enjoyable and happy.

解析     这是一篇图画作文,先描述图,再谈看法。漫画中间是一个蜷缩成一团的老人,漫画左上右上,左下,右下分别为老人的大儿子、二儿子、小儿子和小女儿。每个人后面均有一个足球门。不难推测大致意思是现在的子女都不赡养父母,将父母像足球一样踢来踢去。
    所以,第一段应该先对图画进行描述,让大家大概的明白,明白这幅图画是什么意思,最后用两句描述一下就可以了,这是第一个自然段。核心的段落,应该是在第二段。第二段就是把这幅漫画的意图要说清楚,也就是说它给我们带来什么样的思考?我们要通过现象看本质,为什么会是这样?这些年轻人到底怎么了?这些老年人为什么会是现在这种状况呢?人都是要老的,是不是会让我们意识到一点,我们现在如此对待老年人,把他像足球一样踢来踢去,如果假设真是这样的话,那这个老年人的今天也有可能就是你自己的明天,这些都是有感而发的。第三段里面,给出一些建议措施,怎么样解决这个社会问题。
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