For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the picture, analyze its causes and then explain what you will do to solve the problem. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案 In the drawing, a woman and her child climb up a stone-lion to pose for a picture regardless of a sign saying protect historic sites and climbing is prohibited. This drawing vividly depicts the improper behavior of people in travel. This kind of phenomenon is not uncommon in our daily life. Why so? There are mainly two reasons for people’s misbehavior. For one thing, being poorly educated in terms of social behavior and morality, some people fail to realize that some practices are improper in public places. For another, some other people, though fully aware of the impropriety of their behavior, still feel no worries to do it utterly out of egoism. Two measures, I think, can be taken to solve the problem. On the on hand, moral cultivation should be carried out in schools and the whole society so that people can be self-disciplined. On the other hand, punishment should be enforced on those whose behavior is annoying or harmful to public morality.

解析     这是一篇图画作文,要求考生描述图画的内容,分析现象和原因,并就图画反映的现象提出应对的措施。根据题目要求,文章的结构可以安排如下:
    第一段:描述图画内容。
    第二段:分析两方面原因:
    1.有的人缺乏素养,没有意识到在公共场合有的行为是不当的。
    2.有的人以自我为中心,明知故犯。
    第三段:针对原因,提出相应措施。
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