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  3. Look at the following picture and write an article on overweight kids in our country. Your article should meet the following two

Look at the following picture and write an article on overweight kids in our country. Your article should meet the following two

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问题     Look at the following picture and write an article on overweight kids in our country. Your article should meet the following two requirements
    1) interpret the message conveyed by the picture
    2) make your comments on the phenomenon
    You should write about 160～200 words neatly.
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答案 While people are paying ever greater attention to the problem of obesity among adults, it is certainly important to show adequate concern for our heavy kids as well. As the above picture shows, some children, who are obviously overweight for their age, are going towards the entrance of an elementary school. Isn’t this picture an alert for our society and parents to take action to stop this phenomenon? Evidently, it is their parents and even grandparents who should be blamed for the children’s heaviness. Due largely to the birth control policy, many families in China have only one child to whom they devote all their love and care. These only children can have virtually everything they desire, be it food or toys. And thus those much advertised westernized food like coke, French fries, fried chicken and other high-calorie food become children’s "favorites", resulting in obesity in children. Obesity will not only harm the children’s health but also pose a threat to the future of our country since children are the pillar of a country’s future. Here I do not want to suggest any concrete solutions to the problem since such solutions are not difficult to be found. All I want to do is to arouse our awareness to this phenomenon, Obesity among our children.
解析     图画作文，要审读作文指令和提纲，看懂图画，确定文章的主题。就本题而言，命题者显然期望考生对当今国内儿童肥胖现象做一讨论。预先设定好三段的写作内容后，方可动手写作。考生们写完自己的作文后，可参看并分析下面的范文，如它是怎样展开三段的内容的，又用了哪些句式和词汇去表达内容，以从中汲取写作的营养。
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