Illegal Cooking Oil Is Everywhere Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) des

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问题     Illegal Cooking Oil Is Everywhere
    Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should
    1) describe the drawing briefly,
    2) explain its intended meaning, and
    3) give your comments.
   

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答案 As is shown in the picture, several casks of illegal cooking oil are the source to a cooking oil factory, a supermarket and a restaurant. Then the waste cooking oil from the restaurant is recycled and collected back to the production, sale and use cycle. This picture vividly illustrates the process of how illegal cooking oil is produced, sold, used and reused. It sends a strong message to us that this hazardous oil seems to exist in every part of our life. For the sake of people’s health, the authorities concerned must enhance the law enforcement to eliminate the practice of producing and selling illegal cooking oil. First, a special team needs to be set up to locate any unlawful oil production factories. Once found, the owners should be charged for criminal offence, as they have put others’ lives in danger. Second, the authorities concerned should set up a hotline so that the public could get through on it to the special team and tip them off. A reward could be offered to the "whistle-blower" as an incentive. To sum up, the elimination of illegal cooking oil depends on the joint efforts from the government and the general public.

解析     这幅图片刻画了地沟油从生产、销售到使用、回收的情景。整个产业链可谓完备。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:
    第一段描绘图片,指出地沟油似乎无处不在,整个产业链俨然完备。
    第二段指出有关部门应该加强执法来遏制地沟油的生产和售卖。其一,成立专项小组,彻查任何违法生产地沟油的工厂。其二,设立举报热线,鼓励群众提供线索,并给予一定的奖励。
    第三段总结全文:根除地沟油,需要政府和群众的共同努力。
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