For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the pi

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the problem of material abundance and capability. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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答案 Material Abundance and Capability The above picture is a vivid description of the present phenomenon for some rich young children. Material abundance makes them feel different from others because they can afford luxury clothes, electronic products, etc. to show off their wealth. However, material abundance brings only superficial confidence for them and cannot provide them with long-lasting capability. Firstly, material abundance can only distinguish them from others superficially. Along with the passing of time, people get to know others better and have their judgment according to some inside merits such as honesty, persistence, kindness, etc. Secondly, material abundance tend to make one lose persistence and patience in perfecting themselves. Thirdly, this kind of material wealth is accumulated by the parents, and therefore should not be bragged about by the children. All in all, we are living in a society featured by wealth gap, but people are born equal. We should not rely on material abundance or stop making efforts to be a better man.

解析     第一段说明图片体现的问题。首句直截了当地说明图片反映了当前富人的孩子的一些问题。本段末句用because引导的原因状语从句说明物质上的富足让这些孩子感觉他们与其他孩子不同。
    第二段分析了物质富足给孩子可能带来的一些不良后果。首先,物质上的富足只能从表面上让这些富人的孩子与其他孩子有所区别,但随着时间的推移,人们会更加了解其他人,会根据一些内在品质对孩子作出判断;第二,在追求自我完善的过程中,物质上的富足会使人丧失执着和耐心;最后,物质上的财富是父母积累起来的,因此,孩子们没什么可吹嘘的。本段中,long-lastingcapability,bragged about等均为高分表达。
    第三段总结全文并号召大家持续努力完善自我。
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