Blood Donation Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing b

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问题     Blood Donation
    Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should
    1) describe the drawing briefly,
    2) explain its intended meaning, and
    3) give your comments.
   

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答案 As can be seen, the picture is divided into two parts. In the first part, a girl is passing by, seeing three people lining up to donate their blood. In the second part, the girl is motivated by what she saw and joins the queue. This picture intends to call for more people to follow the examples illustrated, implying that the act of donating blood is noble and admirable. In my opinion, donating blood is indeed a virtuous act that benefits both the taker and the giver. For one thing, donating blood could help those who need a blood transfusion, or even save their lives. For example, in case of a car crash, a victim who is losing too much blood may be in danger of losing his/her life. If no one had donated blood to blood banks beforehand, the victim would eventually die from excessive blood loss. For another, donating blood, as a matter of fact, helps donors as well. Research findings have shown that donating moderate amount of blood helps blood recycle in our body, which is of great benefit to our physical health. In conclusion, it is advised that we join the noble ranks of blood donors to help others, as well as ourselves.

解析     这幅图片刻画了小女孩看到路人献血后也加入捐血行列的情景,可见该图呼吁我们热心献血。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:
    第一段描绘图片,并指出图片意在呼吁更多人加入献血行列
    第二段提出个人看法:献血对捐献者和受助者都有益。其一,献血能帮助有需要的病人,挽救他们的生命。其二,研究发现献血有助于血液循环,对捐献者的身体也有益处。
    第三段总结全文:我们应该加入到献血行列,帮助他人的同时也帮助自己。
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