In 2012 London Olympic Games, negative competition for the final gold medal occurred in badminton competitions. Some believe tha

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问题     In 2012 London Olympic Games, negative competition for the final gold medal occurred in badminton competitions. Some believe that it is not right to focus only on the outcome regardless of the process, while others believe that the process is not that important since the only goal of competition is to win. What’s your opinion?
    Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    Is the Outcome More Important than the Process in Competition?

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答案 Is the Outcome More Important than the Process in Competition? People hold different opinions on whether the outcome or the process is more important in competition. Some assert that the outcome is the only thing that matters in competition and everything else can be negligible, while others hold a different view. For me, the process is more important than the outcome in competition. There are several reasons that can support my idea. Firstly, the most valuable thing in competition is not the outcome but the experience and knowledge that one acquires in the process since they can truly make one better. With respect to what one has learned, the process might be his best lesson. Besides, if one only values the outcome, he will design the process to get to the destination or win the game in the most efficient way or choose the shortest route with the fewest obstacles, which will definitely make him miss the fun during the process. At the same time, one will miss by going too fast not only the fun, but also the original goal. Furthermore, those who only cares for winning or losing might use dirty tricks to win. These people will never win others’ respect. People only respect those who succeed through their own efforts. So we should focus on the process, not the outcome. All in all, although we cannot deny the influence of the outcome, the process is more important in competition and our daily life. We should learn to enjoy the process, and the process of striving from one goal to the next.

解析     本题是一个对比选择型题目,核心问题是比赛中结果和过程哪个更重要。要求考生结合自己的想法或经历对此问题进行比较分析,然后选择其中一个观点,给出理由进行论证。
    思路1:比赛结果比过程更重要。
    在任何比赛中,选手都抱着求胜的心理,所以一切努力的过程都是为结果服务。结果是实现自我价值的导引,是实现自我价值的集中体现,因此结果比过程更重要。
    思路2:比赛过程比结果更重要。
    人们在比赛过程中获取的经验、方法、教训才是真正能使人进步的,比比赛结果更有意义。其次,过于注重结果会使人错失很多过程中的乐趣。而且同样是取得成功,我们更尊重那些靠自己努力而获得成功的人,而不会认可在过程中用不正当手段达到目的的人。范文选取了思路2,从三方面阐述比赛过程比结果更重要。
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