The Dangers of Smoking Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the d

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问题     The Dangers of Smoking
    Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should
    1) describe the drawing briefly,
    2) explain its intended meaning, and then
    3) give your comments.
   

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答案 As can be seen in the picture, a man is lighting his cigarette, with his shadow being enlarged and cast on the wall. However, there is one inconsistency. His shadow is not lighting a cigarette, but rather holding a gun pointed at himself. The picture, as I see it, intends to warn its readers of the dangers of smoking by comparing smoking to committing suicide. There is no doubt that smoking is harmful to us and people around us. For one thing, smoking is detrimental to our lungs. People with a long history of smoking are most likely to develop lung cancer and other lung disorders. For another thing, smoking poses threats to family members and friends. As is known to all, the adverse effects caused by second-hand smoking are even worse than those caused by first-hand smoking. People who are exposed to second-hand smoking are actually victimized by smokers’ self-indulgent pursuit of pleasure. This is unfair and unacceptable. Given the harm done by smoking, it is advisable to quit smoking, or at least keep it to yourself.

解析     这幅图片刻画了一名吸烟人士。图的关键在于他身后的影子,打火机和香烟的影子居然是一把对着他的手枪,可见该图是要引起读者对吸烟危害的重视。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:
    第一段描绘图片,并指出图片意在强调吸烟的危害。
    第二段提出个人看法:吸烟对我们和周围的人都有危害。其一,吸烟对我们身体健康有害,以肺部为例。其二,二手烟威胁家人和朋友的健康。
    第三段提出建议。
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