On Losing Weight 关于减肥 A.Title: On Losing Weight B.Word limit: 160-200 words (not including the given opening sentence) C.Your co

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问题 On Losing Weight
关于减肥
A.Title: On Losing Weight
B.Word limit: 160-200 words (not including the given opening sentence)
C.Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: "Losing weight has gained much popularity today, especially among girls."
OUTLINE:
1.Many young people are keen on losing weight
2.The reasons
3.How to lose weight healthily

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答案 Losing weight has gained much popularity today, especially among girls. The media, such as TV programs, magazines and newspapers, are talking about losing weight. Why are so many people keen on losing weight? One of the main reasons is that many people are suffering from obesity, which is a risk factor for certain health conditions or increased mortality. For the sake of health, they have to lose weight and build a strong constitution. Another reason is that many young ladies are deeply influenced by the idea that the slimmer they are, the more attractive they will become. In order to get a nice figure, they are paying much attention to their weight. As far as I am concerned, whatever the reason may be, people should lose weight in a reasonable way. It is often seen that a lot of people try to lose weight by extreme dieting, such as only eating apples and drinking water. It may, however, lead to some side effects and thus be harmful to their health. Personally, I would prefer doing exercises, a healthier way to lose weight, rather than eating less. After all, being healthy is of more significance than losing weight.

解析     本文是一篇议论文,讨论减肥的话题。文章内容可安排如下:
    第一段引出话题:减肥很受欢迎。
    第二段分析减肥的原因:一是为自身健康着想;二是为变得更漂亮。
    第三段阐述个人的观点:强调减肥要用合理的方式,推荐以做运动代替节食来减肥。
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