都市寸土千金,地价炒得越来越高,今后将更高。拥有一个小小花园的希望,对寻常之辈不啻是一种奢望,一种梦想。 我想,其实谁都有一个小小花园,这便是我们的内心世界。人的智力需要开发,人的内心世界也是需要开发的。人和动物的区别,除了众所周知的诸多方面,恐怕

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问题     都市寸土千金,地价炒得越来越高,今后将更高。拥有一个小小花园的希望,对寻常之辈不啻是一种奢望,一种梦想。
    我想,其实谁都有一个小小花园,这便是我们的内心世界。人的智力需要开发,人的内心世界也是需要开发的。人和动物的区别,除了众所周知的诸多方面,恐怕还在于人有内心世界。心不过是人的一个重要脏器,而内心世界是一种景观,它是由外部世界不断地作用于内心渐渐形成的。每个人都无比关注自己及至亲至爱之人心脏的健损,以至于稍有微疾便惶惶不可终日。但并非每个人都关注自己及至亲至爱之人的内心世界的阴晴。

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答案In my opinion, everyone in fact has a small garden, which is their inner world. Human intelligence needs to be developed, so does the inner world. The difference between men and other animals, in addition to many well-known ones, may also exist in their inner worlds. The heart is merely an important organ, but the inner world is a view of life that gradually takes shape under the constant influence of the outside world on one’s mentality. Everyone is so concerned about the physical health of his heart and the hearts of his beloved ones that a slight disease would cause great anxiety. But not everyone is concerned about the brightness or cloudiness of their own inner worlds and those of their beloved ones.

解析 1.本文为带有哲学思辨色彩的议论文体,故译文总体上采用一般现在时。
2.第1句的“内心世界”译为inner world,“其实”可译成in fact,需要注意的是它所修饰的是“谁都有一个小小的花园”,所以翻译时应注意它的正确位置,可译成everyone in fact has a small garden。
3.第2句的“人的内心世界也是需要开发的”用so does结构替代,避免重复。
4.第3句的“人和动物”应译成men and other animals,将“人”和“动物”并列比较时,“人”不宜译成people。“众所周知的诸多方面”可译为many well-known ones,简洁地道。
5.第5句的“以至于”可译为英语so…that句型;因为此句主要将作为生理学概念的“心脏健康”和作为心理学概念的“心理健康”进行比较,可将“心脏的健损”译成physical health(well being)of his heart;将“内心世界的阴晴”译成the brightness or cloudiness of their own inner world,即精确表达原文的含义,又保留原文的修辞手段,符合原文的文体特征。
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